SECOND ART THREAD.. woo.. okay.

[Kraine]

So I reallly don't usually draw people. But I wanted to somehow show you guys my character. So.. any comments are appreciated!

I haven't decided on her name yet, but I have a few things nailed down. I'll let you wonder till I post the profile!

EDIT: Critique is very welcome. I want to improve as much as I can.

BIGGER EDIT: I moved the mouth. Does it look any better?



One with the editted mouth.

Now I'm gonna go sulk about not being able to draw humans well enough.

Fun with the smudge tool.

[Quail]

Oh, she's pretty! Love the feathery(?) skirt. Super adorable. And her hair was done very well too.

[Grant]

Name her Clover

[Kraine]

Jun 2, 2010 22:35:29 GMT -5 Quail said:

Oh, she's pretty! Love the feathery(?) skirt. Super adorable. And her hair was done very well too.

Aw, thank you. And you're right, it is made of feathers! I'm glad you noticed.

grant said:

Name her Clover

Hm. Maybe. Might be a little too cliche.

[Rip]

This is really cute! I like her hair and her little bird friend. As for critique, the big thing here that I notice is her lips are really low. If you look in the mirror, you can see your nose, a little dent and then your lips. It's not much of a distance. This is really cool though!

[Malevolent]

Awwww, I think she's really cute! You should keep drawing people. You can only get better~

[Kraine]

Lol, so I moved the mouth and lazily smudged around it. Thanks for the help and compliments guys!

[Quail]

Aw, I thought the mouth was kind of cute lower down. It was all Kraine style.

[Kraine]

Frealzies? I kinda liked it too.. I'll put both up! And I appreciate that comment. It's nice to know I have a good style. :]

[Jemi]

The second one looks much better ^^

I love your humans! Do you take requests/trades?

[Kraine]

Thanks. d: In the case of requests.. mayyybe. If trades, perhaps if you can also draw pretty well. Commissions are always open too. Understand though that I am not experienced at drawing humans, so it's not gonna be perfect.

[Gypsy]

Aw, you're not that bad at people.. a few anatomy issues ( the belly button looks a bit low and the thighs need to be longer ) but otherwise it looks great.

I really like the hair and skirts though. Very cool character. :3

[Kraine]

Thanks a lot Gypsy! Especially for the help. I knew the thighs were too short when I drew it.. then I was too lazy to fix it. :I And I'll remember the belly button thing.

Muchas gracias. :]