Post by finch on Jul 31, 2010 0:11:28 GMT -5
(tag Jan, but anyone welcome, really)
Valentine loved the buzz of the docks. Sailors swarming the ships like rats, dockworkers trundling back and forth laden with cargo, merchants gathering in brightly-colored clumps haggling and shouting, children and animals scooting about underfoot: he could feel the lifeblood of the city pumping around him. Noise and life everywhere, driving Sideris; it made Valentine feel like a part of something great.
The squat, swarthy man standing in front of Valentine was a part of the great whole, too. His rumpled, grimy clothes, missing right eye, and even the distinctive smell of alcohol on his breath all gave testament to his hard work on behalf of the nation's commerce. The man was shipping― Valentine flipped through the sheaf of papers, sticky and slightly bloated from salt and sea, that the man had shoved into his hands― hats. Four crates of bowler hats, two crates of berets, four crates of steel helmets, and six crates of― Valentine squinted at the smudged black ink― “assorted women's fashions.” The young prince (or, in his current role, young soldier) looked up from the paperwork into the man's fixedly smiling face. The man, who the paperwork identified as Captain Erwin Smith, was missing several teeth.
Behind Captain Smith and his gap-toothed yellow smile sat his boat, her ragged crew hurriedly unloading their cargo of hats. Obviously they had a tide to catch. Valentine never could keep track of the tides.
“Your paperwork looks to be in order, Captain Smith,” Valentine announced, offering the man back his papers. The captain snatched them eagerly. “Now I just need to see some proof-of-purchase for those hats and you can be about you business.”
“Ah... yes. Proof of... purchase. Of course. I forgot that... uh... in my cabin. Let me go get it. Wait right there.” The captain's long gray tail was twitching and twisting behind him; he obviously didn't like the idea of making a soldier wait. He rushed off towards his ship, heavy leather boots thumping on the dock as he went. Valentine turned away from the ship to survey the hustle and bustle of the docks. He folded his arms in front of his uniformed chest, shifting his weight so that his saber and pistol sat more comfortably against his side. He watched with mild interest as two men struggled past him carrying a heavy wooden crate between them.
Initially, his transfer to Fossgate had disappointed Valentine; he understood that his parents needed him somewhere less dangerous than the front lines, but he had enjoyed the action of battle. He was good at fighting, and he didn't have to think very hard about it. However, Fossgate was beginning to win him over. Here in the heart of the country he could interact with the people. Good, hardworking people like Captain Smith, people who reminded him what he had been fighting for. He had fought the country's enemies so that the people of Sideris could fill out the proper paperwork and enjoy their hats unmolested.
Speaking of which, where was the captain? How long did it take to fetch a form? Perhaps, Valentine thought, turning back towards the ship, perhaps I should check on him.
Valentine loved the buzz of the docks. Sailors swarming the ships like rats, dockworkers trundling back and forth laden with cargo, merchants gathering in brightly-colored clumps haggling and shouting, children and animals scooting about underfoot: he could feel the lifeblood of the city pumping around him. Noise and life everywhere, driving Sideris; it made Valentine feel like a part of something great.
The squat, swarthy man standing in front of Valentine was a part of the great whole, too. His rumpled, grimy clothes, missing right eye, and even the distinctive smell of alcohol on his breath all gave testament to his hard work on behalf of the nation's commerce. The man was shipping― Valentine flipped through the sheaf of papers, sticky and slightly bloated from salt and sea, that the man had shoved into his hands― hats. Four crates of bowler hats, two crates of berets, four crates of steel helmets, and six crates of― Valentine squinted at the smudged black ink― “assorted women's fashions.” The young prince (or, in his current role, young soldier) looked up from the paperwork into the man's fixedly smiling face. The man, who the paperwork identified as Captain Erwin Smith, was missing several teeth.
Behind Captain Smith and his gap-toothed yellow smile sat his boat, her ragged crew hurriedly unloading their cargo of hats. Obviously they had a tide to catch. Valentine never could keep track of the tides.
“Your paperwork looks to be in order, Captain Smith,” Valentine announced, offering the man back his papers. The captain snatched them eagerly. “Now I just need to see some proof-of-purchase for those hats and you can be about you business.”
“Ah... yes. Proof of... purchase. Of course. I forgot that... uh... in my cabin. Let me go get it. Wait right there.” The captain's long gray tail was twitching and twisting behind him; he obviously didn't like the idea of making a soldier wait. He rushed off towards his ship, heavy leather boots thumping on the dock as he went. Valentine turned away from the ship to survey the hustle and bustle of the docks. He folded his arms in front of his uniformed chest, shifting his weight so that his saber and pistol sat more comfortably against his side. He watched with mild interest as two men struggled past him carrying a heavy wooden crate between them.
Initially, his transfer to Fossgate had disappointed Valentine; he understood that his parents needed him somewhere less dangerous than the front lines, but he had enjoyed the action of battle. He was good at fighting, and he didn't have to think very hard about it. However, Fossgate was beginning to win him over. Here in the heart of the country he could interact with the people. Good, hardworking people like Captain Smith, people who reminded him what he had been fighting for. He had fought the country's enemies so that the people of Sideris could fill out the proper paperwork and enjoy their hats unmolested.
Speaking of which, where was the captain? How long did it take to fetch a form? Perhaps, Valentine thought, turning back towards the ship, perhaps I should check on him.